24:30 Tell the believing men to lower their gaze, and guard their modesty. This helps them grow in character. Surely, God is Aware of
what they do.
24:31 And tell the believing women to lower their gaze, and guard their modesty. They should not show off their adornment beyond what may be decently and spontaneously apparent. Let them cover their chest area with a light covering.
The above is from our Lord, Allah, who gave His Qur'an for a reason, to guide us, but your real lord is Bukhari and all he told you is a religious obligation not authorised by Allah.
Your poem is a mixture of truth and falsehood
Which needs re-writing as it is deadwood.
Teachings are pure from Allah alone
Or in the wind you will be blown.
Bukhari et al have no Divine sanction
And on Judgement Day you will have fiery action.
Read the Qur'an, the Word of Him
Reject the fairy-tales of the ancestral whim.
The Messenger's wives must cover their bodies
But the firqa women are not Qur'anic ladies.
Your minds are veiled by the sayings of man
Oppressed but perceived not, thanks to satan.
The sword of intellect is dulled with age,
Twisted like the bone from the rib-cage.